try to make my life a metaphor for a story,
Hello, I am trying to purchase an essay for the personal essay of the common application.
The conditions for the essay are:
“The essay demonstrates your ability to write clearly and concisely on a selected topic and helps you distinguish yourself in your own voice. What do you want the readers of your application to know about you apart from courses, grades, and test scores? Choose the option that best helps you answer that question and write an essay of no more than 650 words, using the prompt to inspire and structure your response. Remember: 650 words is your limit, not your goal. Use the full range if you need it, but don’t feel obligated to do so. (The application won’t accept a response shorter than 250 words.)”
And, also the question I want to answer is:
“Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.”
What I want to do for this topic is try to make my life a metaphor for a story, where each chapter as a page of my life.
I would like to discuss the cultivation of myself as a person from my childhood all the way to high school.
In the first body paragraph, I want to say how my childhood was primarily comprised of my fascinations with robots and video games, and a small foreshadow of how i decided to choose my major, computer science.
Second : Describes how i grew out of my childhood phase and developed my desire to learn from reading books, and traveling the world
Third chapter: start of my early teen life is just filled with textbooks. Where I began to develop my qualities of determination and perseverance from the past failures from school
(considering adding the death of my grandpa and how it affected my junior year grades, maybe I could have learned something important that will reveal something within myself)
Foruth Chapter: where me and alongside with other friends created a robotics group. I was not interested it at first, but as I began to recognize the coding that went into the robot, i was reminded of my childhood and my fascination for computer science began to rise. Made it to state finals in our first year.
Fifth: this chapter is not quite yet filled, as it is mainly composed of college brochures and applications. I hope to continue my story at their college and hope to find future success at the chosen institution